My Writing Class

              Every Monday (Unless changed) I have a writing class at my Chinese school 7:00-8:30 . Last time I learned about hooks,thesis and transition sentences. The hook is a sentence that catches a reader's eye so the reader will want to keep on reading. Here are some I learned that you can try...   Imagine... You are a famous rock star and was the most richest person in the world OR Would you like to be the most richest rock star? OR "EVERYBODY GET A CAR" Those were the famous words of Oprah Winfrey. Right after the hook is the thesis. The thesis is a sentence that tells what your paragraph is going to be about. Example: He had a poor childhood, a rich adulthood and then he just got famous! After the thesis there is a transition sentence. It makes the paragraph smooth so the reader is on the right track and is going to know what the next paragraph is about. That is all I learned at class so next time I will tell  more!